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Sept 15, 2012 17:52:55 GMT -4
Post by Jin Kiriha on Sept 15, 2012 17:52:55 GMT -4
I decided early today that once I clear some of my work (Kamen Rider: The Last, Super Sentai: The First, Space Sheriff: The First), I'm going to actually do a rewrite of Go-Busters. Remove things I didn't like (J), add some better things (Escape having a point aside from being a sex object), etc.
I'm looking for suggestions about what I could possibly do. What did you not like in Busters that you think could be improved, for instance? I'm taking suggestions for when I begin my work.
If anyone wants, I can leave a small list of what I have thus far.
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Sept 20, 2012 0:12:41 GMT -4
Post by Jin Kiriha on Sept 20, 2012 0:12:41 GMT -4
Sorry, double post, but what I have compiled thus far:
No J
Enter/Escape as Beet and Stag initially
Kuroki becomes a temporary Beet after getting it back from Enter, though Jin later appears and becomes the permanent Beet
Enter eventually brings out VagBeet
When Enter steals the 04 blueprints, he steals the data for Beet/Stag, prototype suits. When Escape appears, they both use the suits. Eventually the EMC recovers them, unsure of what to do with them. Kuroki uses Beet for some time with a temporary anti-virus to let him use the suit. Jin later appears as the more permanent user
Ryuji is leader
Rivalry with Hiromu
Metaroid from movie is “Delete” in a Metaroid body, rather than human avatar
Enter and Escape pilot the Delta Megazords as Beet and Stag
Ace destroyed, LT-06 replaces it
Enetan gets used
Hiromu freezes when he’s afraid now, no more chicken fears. His fear can overcome him when having to deal with the fact that Enter is targeting civilians and stuff like that
Escape has a purpose and isn't just a sex object, like she's supposed to be for viewers
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